Trash - Ben
I'm quite a few weeks a-head, so I don't want to give too much away. I'm on p.g 175 :/
I'm going to just share some wanderings with you and some things I found Interesting in this text.
-On the FIRST page of this book, I was automatically engaged to read this, because I would like to know how it would feel to live in a dumpsite.\
-On page TWENTY TWO I loved how they described 'rat' (jun jun)
-On page THIRTY SEVEN they used show not tell and said "it was so crowded you couldn't breath."
-On page FIFTY SEVEN this book makes me understand how the characters feel, they used descriptive language and show not tell.
-On page ONE HUNDRED AND FIFTY NINE and around that section, it was difficult to understand what was happening.
This book is very bloody it has things like snapping bones, suicides, Blood and Gore everywhere. It makes me partially uneasy.
Right now I'm on the climax with LOTS of questions like...
Why would he lie to the police?
How is Jose Angelico connected to ANYTHING
and more...
I think the author could have done a better job at the plot. I DON'T KNOW if these are plot twists, but right now it seems like the plot is doing WHATEVER IT WANTS!!!
I know I'm talking bad about this book, but things just don't make sense...
Like, WHO IS EVEN THE MAIN CHARACTER IF IT'S A DUEL STORY-LINE?!?!
To be honest, this book needs improvement and I think it would be an AMAZING book if I just knew more about what was happening.
I'm going to just share some wanderings with you and some things I found Interesting in this text.
-On the FIRST page of this book, I was automatically engaged to read this, because I would like to know how it would feel to live in a dumpsite.\
-On page TWENTY TWO I loved how they described 'rat' (jun jun)
-On page THIRTY SEVEN they used show not tell and said "it was so crowded you couldn't breath."
-On page FIFTY SEVEN this book makes me understand how the characters feel, they used descriptive language and show not tell.
-On page ONE HUNDRED AND FIFTY NINE and around that section, it was difficult to understand what was happening.
This book is very bloody it has things like snapping bones, suicides, Blood and Gore everywhere. It makes me partially uneasy.
Right now I'm on the climax with LOTS of questions like...
Why would he lie to the police?
How is Jose Angelico connected to ANYTHING
and more...
I think the author could have done a better job at the plot. I DON'T KNOW if these are plot twists, but right now it seems like the plot is doing WHATEVER IT WANTS!!!
I know I'm talking bad about this book, but things just don't make sense...
Like, WHO IS EVEN THE MAIN CHARACTER IF IT'S A DUEL STORY-LINE?!?!
To be honest, this book needs improvement and I think it would be an AMAZING book if I just knew more about what was happening.
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